今回から、先日2025年に実施された大学入学共通テストでの
英語の問題を扱って行きます。
基本的な問題の扱い方
今回、このブログでは、
共通テスト(英語)の「リーディング」の問題だけを扱うこととします。
基本的な問題の扱い方は、下記の通りにします。
①問題の提示
※基本的には「大問」毎に扱う予定ですが、問題の量などによりそれより細かく区切って取り扱うこともあります。
②模範解答の提示
③解説
④そのほかの補説
今回は、第2問を扱います。
第4問:配点12▶︎ 3点✖️4問
※各大問の英文や図表を読み、解答番号【 1 】〜【 49 】にあてはまるものとして
最も適当な選択肢を選びなさい。
In English class, you are writing an essay on a topic related to lifestlye in modern
society. This is your most recent draft. You are now wroking on improvements
based on comments from your teacher.
以下「あなたの原稿(先生のコメント付き)」です。
Try a Slow Life
In modern society, people are always busy and this fast pace of living can be stressful. The movement toward a slow life has shown us that you don’t have to be busy all the time. Instead, you can slow down and notice things that are truely meaningful to you. By taking your time and being completely focused on these things, you can improve the quality of your work and life. This essay will discribe some way to do this.
One key point of the slow life is to own fewer
belongings. This makes it easier to concentrate on everyday acitivities. (1)🔼 Many people today tend to buy more than they can consume. Do you really need five parts of the lastest sneakers? Slow-lifers would recommend reducing possessions and buying only necessary items.
Another recommendation is to think about your communication style and manner in your public and private life. Sadly, one study has found that around 90% of people check smartphones during face-to-face conversations, which may appear impolite and affect relationships negatively. (2)🔼
The final aspect of slow living is to take 10 to 15
minutes to reflect on your day. Try to recollect people and events that were siginificant. By mentally highlighting them , you can find fullfillment in daily tasks.
In summary, through a slow life, (3)you can relax. Even small changes can improve your life. Avoid having non-essential items, spend quality time with people around you, and (4)remember what you talked about with your friends. By doing these things, you will have a chance to live a better and more rewarding life.
Comment
(1) Add an appropriate connecting word.
(2) Add a concluding sentence to improve this paragraph.
(3) The underlined part isn’t your main argument. Rewrite it.
(4) The underlined part doesn’t describe your essay content well. Change it.
Overall Comments:
You have really improved your essay. Keep working on it. I’m going to follow
your suggestions to slow down and hopefully improve the quality of my life, 😄
この「エッセイ」に関する質問です。
問1 Based on Comment (1), which is the best word to add?【 14 】
① However
② Moreover
③ Otherwise
④ Therefore
問2 Based on Comment (2), which is the best sentence to add? 【 15 】
① Limit the time you spend having conversations with people.
② Send messages with your phone just once or twice a day.
③ Try to focus your attention on the person you are talking with.
④ Use your phone to find real friends through social media.
問3 Based on Comment (3), which is the best phrase to replace the underlined part?
【 16 】
① you can be satisfied at work and in your personal life
② you can complete tasks in a short period of time
③ you can decrease stress by sharing work with others
④ you can focus on the outcome rather than the process
問4 Based on Comment (4), which is the best phrase to replace the underlined part?
【 17 】
① plan your daily activities as soon as you wake up
② recall the bad things that happened in your life
③ think back to the memorable parts of your day
④ throw away unwanted items before sleeping
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